Recount Writting - Tautoro Cross Country

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

17/08/17

Tautoro Cross Country

Whaea Rosina shouted, “Ready set GO!”

It was Wednesday morning. I was running with the rest of the 7 and 8 year olds around the Padlie farm.

My heart was pounding and my legs felt like wobbly jelly. On my next run I started to have a lot of stitches and so I jogged. The hardest part was running up the hill.

My mum was shouting GO! Ani! GO! Ani!

I had to do two laps and I was in team red. It was so had to run but I did not stop. I was running so fast.

Miss Simeon told us to run in the puddles because we were country kids, so I ran in. The water was cold but that was good because I was so hot.

I started to see the fine line so I ran so fast.

Yay! I came 3rd out of the girls. My mum gave me my powerade. It was so yummy. I was so happy.

   

Recount Writing-At the Pools.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

02/08/17

At the pools

On Sunday afternoon I went with my family to the pools in Whangarei. I was so excited.  

First me and my sister put on our togs and we jumped in the deep end of a big swimming pool. The water was cold as ice. We had a little swim in the cold pool but then we were getting very cold so we went into the spa pool to warm up. It was so warm and lovely.

We had an awesome family day at the pools. It was so much fun.

After that we all went to get some pizza.

Recount Writing-At Jump world.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing

25/10/17

At Jump World

On a hot Sunday afternoon I went with my friends in Auckland to Jump World.

When we got there I saw the foam pit. I felt excited.

I said to my friends, “I want to go in the foam pit.” So we all went in.

The first thing we did was jump off the big box

into the foam pit. It was awesome and amazing.

The next thing we did was jumping on the bouncy trampoline. I really enjoyed the trampolines because I could bounce up so high.

Then we went climbing  

It was so wonderful. I felt amazed.