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Wednesday, November 18, 2020

Friday, September 18, 2020

The Little old women

 As I look in the mirror all I see is a haggard, wrinkled old lady that lives in a land-fill with no family. I am wearing a worn out scarf and red broken, rusted glasses. As I looked around me I saw boxes and one caught my eye. I thought there was gonna be treasure or something valuable but all I found was a torn up yellow umbrella. I put the umbrella in my old torn up shopping cart because it could be useful for when it’s raining. I walked off to find other treasures. As I was searching through other boxes I found a can that could be useful. I gazed through another box and all I found were plastic birds. I put them in my shopping cart to use them as decoration in my rusted yellow tent. As I searched around I spotted an old worn out car, so I hopped in and discovered an air fr-eshener, I gave it a sniff and it smelt so good!! I leaned back in my seat. The seat was so old it fell back. I looked behind me and saw an amazing antique box under the seat so I immediately grabbed it and opened it. At first I saw a beautiful broken pearl bracelet, then I moved the box around and saw a beautiful, shiny, stunning, shimmery, diamond ring. I made a huge smile on my face. I rushed back to my yellow tent and decorated it with the valuables I found, and went to bed with a huge smile on my face. :)

Thursday, March 5, 2020

Self-Management

This is my self-Management movie I made with my friends Myer and Soraya

Water Cycle

Writing self assessment

WALT: Self assess our writing.
Success Criteria: I will use the seven elements to help me with my work.
I will assess my writing against the seven elements. 
Ideas: 5-Because I have lots of ideas that connect to the topic and each idea is supported by extra information.
Structure and Language: 5- because My writing is structured appropriately and is well developed.
Organisation: 5- My ideas are organised into basic paragraphs.
Vocabulary: 4- Because I used words that make people want to read my work.
Sentence Structure: 3- Because I am beginning to use different.
Punctuation: 5- Because I can use 
   

   

Wednesday, February 12, 2020